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What if I told you I wasn't wearing any pants?

                                                        I would assume you're wearing something else.


What if I told you when I closed my eyes I saw your face?

                                                                            I would think your eyes are open.

In the shadows, I longed for your embrace?

                                                               Then why is it a blanket that you're holding?

Asked for just one last little kiss?

                                                           I'd wonder why you're asking.

Couldn't live without your scent or taste?

                                                                   I think you're a little odd.

See you in my future, what do you say?

                                                                        Tomorrow is just another day.

Dream of you each night as I lie alone in bed?

                                                         How can you be alone if I'm in your dreams?

Would you dance with me if I asked you to?

                                                                     I have two left feet, but maybe...for you.

Wipe away the tears I'm crying?

                                            I would, but don't understand why you're crying.

And if I told you, I love you?

                                                          I'd say, I love you, too.
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Everyone is like "Cassy you're poems are sad. Write something happy" well muahahahahahahahaha! I can write happy stuff, I can I can. lol I think it's cute. Kinda silly. Maybe a bit hard to follow but I am sure you guys can figure it out.
It makes me smile. tehehehe
because I am so obnoxiously odd like that. lol


Enjoy!!!

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:iconduckgirl566:
so cute ^___^

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"Oh snap, we have a love match!"
-You guys really need to stay out of our personal lives.-
~That's why I am working so hard to keep my secret!~
:iconxxqueenieandco:
Totally reminds me of something I'm writing xD

Love it <3
:iconsomething44:
LOL! I thought that the poem was about phone sex because of the first line, but I was wrong. Haha. XD

Actually after I read the whole thing I find it rather cute and sweet, especially the last line. Love the format too. It's like a question and answer between two people. Good job! :thumbsup:

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
:iconksmsoccer89:
haha i love it. its cute :)

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Life can't get much better than this. Appreciate what you have while you have it.
:icondwine:
If I asked you write me a love story, you'd make a comedy out of a tragedy ;) -haha-
:icondarkshadowrage:
Hahaha, nice! XD this was very fun to read.

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Yeah, it's me....what would you expect? :P
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:iconsomeonekrazy69:
cassy i :heart: you!!! i love your amazingly awesome super duper happy poems about how the guy really does love the girl!!!! it makes me think that every one has a someone who is really there soulmate! (even though i all ready found mine) hehe i :heart: your awesomeness cass

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i live in my own haunted wonderland...

:licking:

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. If you do copy and paste this in your signature.
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:iconlovemeethate:
haha. =] i like this.
it was very different from what you usually do.
:P


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The illusion is that you are simply reading this poem.
The reality is that this is more than a poem. -Bukowski
:iconpirate-ld:
Awww, this was so cute!

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Once I was a dreamer,
Once we were all dreamers.
Now again we'll sing- yes. we. can.

[barack obama '08]
:iconhopelesswithhope:
Aww. It's amazing. Totally cute. And just awesome.

Awesome job. =D

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