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It was clear that evening, when the wind suddenly picked up and swept a letter into the tree branch outside of the room on the second floor. A teenage boy looked up from over his laptop, spying the letter neatly tucked away. He got up from his seat and walked swiftly to the window, lest it be blown away before he could reach it. Opening the window, he climbed up on the ledge and snatched the letter, returning safely inside.

Upon reading the letter, he got to a table and started to write.

“Good evening my Angel,

Do the stars miss you dearly when they depart each morning? Does the moon yearn for your gaze as much as I do? How is it there in heaven? What possessed you to write such a letter for a wretched soul? Perhaps I am not the one meant for your adoration, my sweet; please forgive me if you receive this letter to discover that it was sent to the wrong address. I’m afraid  that... my handwriting is abysmal, please forgive me if you cannot read this. Are you certain that this letter was meant for me?

Love at first sight... since when do thine eyes govern over thy heart?  I am certain that we were made for each other the very moment we were born, our destiny written in the stars. So rely not on sight or hearing, but follow your very heart and soul. Perhaps one day, it would lead you to me. Nothing pleases me more than to finally hold you in my arms. I fear for the worst, however, for I am not the shining knight you deserve. This does not mean I will not do my best for you. I will devote myself entirely to you, my heart, mind, body, and soul. I will protect you with all of myself and watch over you while you dream. Fear not your worries in life or troubles which burden you for I will carry your load. There will come a time when you will be angered by me. I will not raise my voice to you and I hope that you can forgive me for my past sins and future mistakes.

As for coffee, I personally prefer tea, and I would take you somewhere that is worthy of your presence, perhaps a café or a classy restaurant. Then perhaps a stroll in the park, we can lie amongst the flowers and gaze up at the stars, which were placed in the heavens only for you. Until it is time for you to descend into my life from the heavens...please take care, my sweet angel. Be safe until I can protect you with my
heart.

Yours Truly,
An admirer of the beloved”

He took the letter and ran outside, dawn was approaching, her ray pinkening the indigo sky. Using all of his might, he pitched the letter high into the air, allowing the draft to carry it away.
This was written by :iconcruellifescorpius: Not quite sure why he did not want to post it himself...but it's amazing, and deserves all the recognition in the world. I personally think it is one of the most romantic things I have ever read in my life.


He "ricks" -nods- He surely does. lol


So yeah don't be like "Cassy, that was amazing"


because I didn't write it. I don't think I could write something as beautiful as that if my life depended it on it.


So stop by his page and just hug him because...he deserves it. -nods-


By the way, this was written in response to my poem: [link]
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:iconisawyouinsummer:
isawyouinsummer Featured By Owner May 14, 2011   Writer
Woah :O Awesome~
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:iconcherokeewarhorse:
CherokeeWarHorse Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2009
I agree. If a guy ever wrote that for me, I'd hug him & cry because it's so beautiful. :love:
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:iconcomputergeekoutofspa:
ComputerGeekOutofSpa Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009  Student Artist
IF a guy wrote that to me...I would...Fall at his feet and be like,"Oh my god! your so HOT!" hahaha...Jk I would kiss him, and tell him,
"Dido."

:D
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:iconangel-l0v3:
Angel-L0v3 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009   Writer
omg i wish i had a guy like that
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:iconiniquitire:
Iniquitire Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
whoa...i had to read that three times to make sure I wasn't dreaming. absolutely beautiful. I like the fact that it isn't the usual "i long for you too" yadda yadda. Its so...so gorgeous. I commend you :clap:
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:iconbluetwing:
bluetwing Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2009   Interface Designer
so beautiful.. i think the sweetest i've read so far! love it!
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:iconpainfulxblissx:
painfulxblissx Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009   Writer
I think my heart just skipped...
I love it so very much! <3 *melts and puddles*
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:iconpineapple-man:
Pineapple-Man Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2009
Oh man I wish I could write something like that, that was beautiful.
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:iconsayagirl:
sayagirl Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008
that was so cute
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:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
XxLonesomeDovexX Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
I read this then urs :D
i love how u said the coffee thing and he said he likes tea better :D made me laugh when I read urs :D i lovee these :D
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:iconrichardsrock:
richardsrock Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2008
*tears* so sweet...
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:iconlaila-jihad:
Laila-Jihad Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
beautifully written!
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:iconlonelymortal:
LonelyMortal Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2008   Writer
Beautiful man
Really something
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:iconemocinderella:
Emocinderella Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my....that was soooo gorgeous! I would die if a guy wrote me a letter like that...just fall over dead.
Happily, of course.

^_^
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008
yeah....I did die...
and then I haven't been quite able to live again....>.>
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:iconemocinderella:
Emocinderella Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
hmm....that was vague...almost sad/sarcastic....?
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
You got it....
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:iconmokubalover:
MokubaLover Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2007  Hobbyist
NYUU! That's so awesome!!! Sooo prettiful... <3
Very very nice, Scorp! <33 :+fav:
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007
I know it is awesome!! I love him so much...
and he wrote that before we were going out...
-shakes head-
He's too good...
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:iconmokubalover:
MokubaLover Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007  Hobbyist
Ooo, wow... He's good. lol
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2007
He is! lol
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:icongabrielalesandrien:
GabrielAlesandrien Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2007
I fav my own work! Oh yeah, take that!
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2007
Whoa! That's talent right there. Lol I'm glad you really enjoy you're own work. lol
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:icongabrielalesandrien:
GabrielAlesandrien Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2007
XD
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:iconxdiscotique:
xdiscotique Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007   Photographer
Um, I want someone to write this to me.
Or something like it.
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
Mhm.....it's so romantic. squee!! ^^
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:iconshadowwolf3117:
ShadowWolf3117 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2007
That's amazing! Pester him to find out why he didnt want to... teh David is most curious...
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2007
Uhm...Okies. I will. lol
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:iconshadowwolf3117:
ShadowWolf3117 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
lol ^^
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:iconfaerygirl24:
faerygirl24 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2007
yo're right, that is one of the most romantic letters i have ever read!!! will definitely stop by his page to congradulate him! ^^
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2007
-nods- It's amazing...if it were real, I would be the happiest person alive, really. lol


And good, he'll love it. ^^ I hope. lol
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:iconfaerygirl24:
faerygirl24 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2007
yeah.
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:iconaubitthehobbit:
AubittheHobbit Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
this is awesome kiddo.

Sorry I have yet to draw that picture been so busy as of late. But I promise to start it right now...
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2007
Thanks, but I didn't write this one. He just did not want to submit it...>.>


And awwah, that's okay. You don't have to if you don't want to. I completely understand. <33 Life has a tendency to....happen. lol
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:iconxfireandicex:
xfireandicex Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007
That was so nicee!!! I LOVED IT!!
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007
I know. Me too....-sighs- I keep sighing a lot. Like if I seriously...got that letter, I probably would faint, and cry a lot...and be so happy that not even the bird's songs could compare....
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:iconxfireandicex:
xfireandicex Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007
omg i kno... i would be so happy i would mostly be in shock tho lol
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:iconmichelleleo71:
michelleleo71 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007
YAY! ^^ a reply a reply! It's so prettyful!
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007
I know!!! ^^ I just want to hug it, and tuck it away under my pillow...-sighs-
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:iconmichelleleo71:
michelleleo71 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2007
^^
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