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Upon a breathless night, I call your name
Hoping you will hear and put my doubts to shame.
Wrap your arms around me and tear down my fear
All I want tonight is to have you near.

I want to feel your lips press against mine
Forget the past and lose track of time.
I want to know how much you truly care
It’s time for us to take the dare.

Let the thunder roll outside the window
Let the rain continually pour down and flow.
Let us move closer to each other now
It’s time for love to take one last bow.

In this world where love is rare
We must find it in our hearts to share
The true desires that we keep under lock and key
And show the world what true love really means.

I want to feel your hands curl around my waist
Love is something we no longer have to chase.
Just let it wash over you—no need to fight
Just give it a chance to be free—just for tonight.

Let the wind outside continue to roar
As we find ourselves lying upon the floor,
Watching the fire build up its flame
Our heated passion doing the same.

Let no fears come in between
Let us learn what love means.
Let us never let go to the beauty we know
It’s time for our love to finally grow.

If I pulled you close now, what would you say?
Speak a sound or walk away?
I’m reaching out for you, longing for your touch
I’ve come to love you so very much.

I want to feel your heat match with mine
Let the beauty of our hearts truly shine.
Watch the world go on without us
As we learn to love and trust.

Let’s no longer try to fight it
Let us try to make it right.
Give us a chance to love each other
See if love can really last forever.

Just one night is all I ask
Shed our tears—take off our masks
Let us forget the worries and the pain
Let us be lovers—lost in the rain.
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Author's Comments

Ah, you may call...but will they listen?


This is something sorta new for me, I usually don't concentrate on physical aspects...but thought I'd give it a go...and even then I didn't really do that good job of it. Ha...oh well. lol


I sorta like it anyway, so there! -sticks out tongue-

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:iconmichelleleo71:
Wow...
Just... wow...
*hugs*
wow... O.O
it's so amazing...

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:icondarkbeautifulmisery:
Beautiful. I can't write with structure. It' irratates me. Fabulous job. Sorry I haven't drawn it yet but I will tonite. I'm procrastinating on my comics agian.

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I mean I'm aubbah I live for hugs...hugs make
the world so much more squishy
:icondoorfromheaven:
-blinks-


Wow....thank you! :glomp: Was...not expecting that. lol

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:icondoorfromheaven:
haha I know the feeling...it actually sort of comes naturally to me. o.O Thanks so much!

And awwah don't worry about it!!! =)

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconpresentdayromeo:
this poem tis be a favorite, very well done. And its true what u say, sometimes no matter how long u and how loud you call for them, they seem deaf to you. its broken my heart everytime.

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:icondoorfromheaven:
Awwwah, wow...thanks so much for the favorite! And the comment. And yeah...it's a shame...sometimes two people so perfect for each other, will never be with each other, because they didn't care to listen...with their heart.


Broken hearts are cruel things...-hugs- Sorry to hear that.

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconpresentdayromeo:
I unfortuately know the true sting of this... It's something you can never forget, or forgive in my case..... Maybe i listen too my heart too much, lol, i dont know anymore, maybe being completely alone isnt so bad...

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He is not a lover who does who does not love forever. ~Euripides~
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:iconstevejones313:
If your work was published in the same book as my poems, I would be very honoured.

Outstanding work - one of you best methinks

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:icondoorfromheaven:
Awwwah...I know...lots of stings...-shrugs-


Well...you can always join me and my hermitness...I even made up 10 reasons why to be a hermit. Yup yup. You should read it...I bet it will at least make you grin. lol

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:icondoorfromheaven:
tehehehe...I think you've said that before...but thank ya ^^

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.

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