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Who is this person I see staring before me?
                     Who is this person so fragile and weak?
I reach out my hand to draw her in close
                       But I’m stopped by a wall. A force.

Who is this person that I cannot reach?
                         She’s just on the other side of me.
I call out softly, but it seems she cannot hear
                   I know she knows I am there.
Her eyes are looking at me. Or perhaps they are looking through
           Into another world or dimension she knows to be true.

Who is this person? I wish I could help
          Raise up to the clouds where she obviously belongs.
Who is this person? I see so much life in her eyes
                    But she’s so scared to show it. Instead tries to hide.

I try to reach out to her again. She reaches for me
                 But when our hands collide. It’s smooth
A surface that is unknown to us. A window to the soul
                      And it is at that moment it sinks in
I know this girl and I know what she knows.

We’re two beings sharing a soul.
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Author's Comments

-shrugs-


I know. Something different.

And it's short!

It took like...5 minutes to write. I just really wanted to write so I did.


Yeah you guys can think about it any way you want. Interrupt it anyway you want...


It's pretty interesting I think...

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:iconicefirex:
nice job.interesting.

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:iconclo-1991:
Very nice, love the style

and ps- happy birthday :hug:

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:iconbabygurlriv:
this is very good.. :D

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A Painted Heaven I may never Feel



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~Clubs: ~DevLit

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:iconwhisperinthetrees:
Cool. It gives the image of a mirror without actually using the word mirror. This is excellently portrayed.

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Look into my captivating blue eyes and tell me you don't love me.
:icondoorfromheaven:
Mhm...thank you very much!

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:icondoorfromheaven:
Thank you!

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:icondoorfromheaven:
Thank you...I like experimenting. lol

Awwwah yay!! :glomp: thanks!

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:icondoorfromheaven:
Thanks...yeah I thought it was interesting too

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconbabygurlriv:
Welcome

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A Painted Heaven I may never Feel



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~Clubs: ~DevLit

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