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Hearts Have Been Broken by ~doorfromheaven:icondoorfromheaven:



Two people sat around a table.
The cards were all dealt out.
One of them smiled with deviousness in his eyes
And the other looked scared—she was way too shy.
He put down the two of clubs
And the game began.
The game was Hearts
And the girl hoped she would win.

On the line was a prize
A prize in life we all want
To have a love to call our own
And that was what the girl dreamed.
But the boy had other plans
As the game took place
For he had her heart in his hands
And lust written on his face.

Hearts have been broken
The Queen of Spades is out.
There’s no words left to be spoken
The girl’s dreams have been sold out.
He takes her hand the game is over
And there’s nothing left to say
Hearts have been broken
They’re breaking everyday.

The game unravels
It continues on.
The boy is in the lead.
The girl is trying so hard
But she can’t succeed.
He has her heart in his hands
He knows the game better
She barely understands.

Hearts have been broken
The Queen of Spades is out.
There’s no words left to be spoken
The girl’s dreams have been sold out.
He can play his cards with charm
Now he takes her in his arms
Hearts have been broken
They’re breaking everyday.

Tears whelm in her eyes
Her love now is the big surprise
There’s no use fighting when the game is won
He knew what he was doing now
But the game has just begun.
He may have won the game
But in her heart, she speaks another name.

Hearts have been broken
They’re breaking everyday.
If you can’t fight the love
There are no words left to say.
In a game of love versus hate
All you have to do is tell your heart to wait.
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Author's Comments

For some reason, I got inspired by the game of Hearts. It's a card game for all those people that don't know, where you get a certain amount of points each time you get a heart or you get a whole lot of points if you get The Queen of Spades, and in this game, points are not good.


I put it under a different category...just to see what would happen. ^.^

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:iconaeronwen:
.... oh mi gosh hun, this is beautiful, and depressing (ooh look, there goes that pattern again)

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:bulletpink::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple:There is a Love in me, Raging: Alegría!:bulletpurple::bulletblue::bulletgreen::bulletyellow::bulletorange::bulletpink:
:icondoorfromheaven:
LoL....Awww, thank ya so much! I happen to really like this one...it just calls to me....-dramatic overdone creepy voice calling here-

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconaeronwen:
well that's interesting now isn't it... The cards are calling! *answers* What do you MEAN it's my deal, I'm on my BREAK!

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:bulletpink::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple:There is a Love in me, Raging: Alegría!:bulletpurple::bulletblue::bulletgreen::bulletyellow::bulletorange::bulletpink:
:icondoorfromheaven:
-dies laughing- Man, those dang cards make me lose everytime! Even when I feel lucky, they always give me the wrong cards...evil deck. I'll show em. I'll buy a BETTER deck...with prettyful designs on the back....

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:icon0tightskee0:
Wow that is just awesome, beautiful, yet depressing as someone said.. I relate a little to well to a lot of your poems.. Up and down relations suck, for lack of a better word. Just to be a little random like I tend to be it has an awesome beat, goes almost perfect with the song I'm listening to.. (Love british Rock haha) But yeah if you can find the song "Stay Positive" By The Streets it just sounds right with your poem.. Anyways.. Fantastic..
-Skee

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"Someone just SHIT on the coats..." -Dane Cook
:icondarkbeautifulmisery:
Wow I really love how you've used "Hearts" In this. You poetry is genius and heartfelt please keep writing.

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"Love is life. And if you miss love, you miss life" by Leo Buscaglia
:iconaeronwen:
LoL, go for it!

*goes and looks for a new deck*

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:bulletpink::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple:There is a Love in me, Raging: Alegría!:bulletpurple::bulletblue::bulletgreen::bulletyellow::bulletorange::bulletpink:
:icondoorfromheaven:
Yeah I really like this one too....and thanks so much! And omg, you like the Streets? I like their song....Dry Your Eyes, my friend got my hooked on that song. So freakin' sad...but wow. And thanks so much for the feedback, I'll have to find that song now....


And omg, you like Dane Cook? You are so my new best friend. Lol I love Dane Cook....he is my role model....I am gonna ride around in a Cement truck just because of em. lmao


Once again, thanks so much for the comment!

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconglitterati:
Ohhh wonderva!!! Absolutely beautiful!! :clap:

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It just glitter lust

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