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Sitting on the sidewalk, soaking up the sun
Thinking of summer days gone by
It was then I saw them—two snails making their way
No idea where they were going
But they weren’t getting there fast.
I could not help but smile—
At the thoughts that came to my head
Of where these two snails could be traveling to
At such a crazy time.
The weather is getting colder, perhaps they’re heading south
But however will they get there? I ponder
But perhaps, this isn’t what it’s about.
Two snails, just enjoying their time together
Slow and steady, about the journey
And not the destination.
They could probably cross the U.S.
And not think about it—
And they would probably turn around
And repeat the journey again.
Perhaps they would take a different path
And explore the world in ways I could not comprehend.
But such is a life of a snail, I’m not quite sure
But I cannot help the smile
That comes to my lips as they turn the curve.
Disappearing from my sight
At their slow and steady pace.
They understand
Life is not a race.
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Author's Comments

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
This one is for you :iconhopelesswithhope:
She's one of my coolie-o new friends on dA that rocks. ^^
and she told me to write a poem about snails.
crossing the US.
Okay this isn't exactly what she probably had in mind..
so this is my way of writing a sucky poem.



I was going to put this under humor.
But decided against it.
No I'm dead serious.
This is a topic not to be handled lightly!!
Don't look at me like that.
Of course I learn lessons from snails.
They're important too!!
And very wise.
You just don't see it!
Poor snails...

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:iconhopelesswithhope:
AHAHAHA

I loveeeeeeeee it. xD It's awesome. And it is SO going on my wall. :lmao:

By the way, you must have been standing there for awhile watching those snails to have them disappear from sight around the bend...

Thank you so much. =D
:iconlovemeethate:
:0 AMAZING!

--

The illusion is that you are simply reading this poem.
The reality is that this is more than a poem. -Bukowski
:icondoorfromheaven:
Lmao I am glad!
Whoo hoo!! It made it to the wall! right on!!!



Yeah...
darn snails..
Took them like 2 hours...
and that's all I could think of?
Wow. Pathetic. lol


welcomez! ^^

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:icondoorfromheaven:
ahaha totally.The snails feel the love. lol

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconhopelesswithhope:
Lol, of course you made it on the wall. Anything you've written could be on my wall. I just have to get unlazy and print out all my stuffs. xD

Lol. Pathetic? Maybe. But you got an awesome poem out of it. =P

:heart:
:icondoorfromheaven:
Psh that's a lie!
I know i have to have scary poem no one would want on their wall somewhere...lol



NUUUU! this was supposed to be a pathetic poem...
gosh..
this sucks. Lol

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconhopelesswithhope:
Lol. I doubt it. Highly.

:lmao: It sucks that it's not pathetic. That right there is funny. xD
:icondoorfromheaven:
No! No one should ever have doubt! Lol


Lmao
Kinda ironic, eh? lol

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconhopelesswithhope:
Haha, yeah!

Yeah, maybe. Kinda. I'm not sure. o.O
:icondoorfromheaven:
Lmao...Man, I wanna listen to that song...

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.

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