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Love can be kind, but it can be cruel
It can mess with your mind
And make you feel like a fool.
It can break your heart
And make you cry.
And there will be times
You want to die.

Love can make you do some crazy things
One moment youíll find yourself
Standing out on a limb.
Losing your balance
Only to find
No one is around to catch you
As you fall from behind.

Love can be evil. Love can be wrong
Love is not always simple
But itís always strong.
How it controls you
Is a question indeed
Because there are times I feel like
I will never be free.

Love can be prison. Love can be blind
How it messes you up
And takes over your mind.
Until you canít think of anyone else
Itís their smile you see
Their happiness you feel
How it drives you crazy
How you wish it wasnít real.

Love can be silly. Love can be cute
It can make you giggle
Sound like a flute.
Melodious and peaceful
As it dances on your heart
Makes you giddy
Right from the start.

Love can be everything or nothing at all
It can be a slow smile
An invitation to a ball.
The happiness you feel
Or the sadness it caused
Love may be fair
Or it may be lost.

Love can be somewhere in a moment so quick
Just a blink of the eye
And youíre feeling sick
As the butterflies tumble
Into your stomach with care
Thatís what love is
Itís in the air.
-sighs-

I don't even know. Don't even ask, because I don't know. I can't write anymore. I don't want to write anymore. This might be my last poem for awhile...and it sucks. whoopie do da...
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Nsawatchlist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Writer
euw
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Randolphtheyeti Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
you hit it on the head here, this piece is so strong and understandable.
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turtleloftus Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
this is beautiful ahdgjkshkghdsk wow !!!!! 
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TonightMyHeartAwakes Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing.. I see where you're coming. I myself wrote a poem about love, and It was kinda abstract but I was trying to make it out to be something beautiful yet dangerous! It's not an easy subject to write about but you have done a good job, do check out my poem: Black Flowers
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F0xf1r3 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is beautiful.
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Nakouwolf Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know it's old but... That text really deserve all the faves and comments you receive. I don't read so many english texts cause I'm french, but this one is just so true... Congratulation for your words :heart: And thanks for sharing it <3
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013   General Artist
Your touching literature has been featured here
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kaleighc18 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, I like it. It's cute. The good and the bad things are what make up love, and people are too hung up in it to see both sides. Good job. :)
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gypsyfoxdancer Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
I really love it. I think everyone can relate, especially to the devastation that comes with it. Sorry you think it sucks, but that is ok. I really like it. :)
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amazing-angel-666 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011   Writer
This is beautiful. You summed up one complicated little word in a touching poem. I love your rhyme scheme, too.
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bleeding-blade Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
this is so ture i want to cry....
why do you hate it?
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Lisa3451 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I really liked this! It's so true. It's this thing called "love" that makes me suffer all the time. And it did NOT suck!
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zzaharel Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Student Photographer
omg, so cute !
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Miscomunication Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
i love it
and how it rhymes too!
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LionHeart-SP Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010  Student Writer
instant fav, this is just, wow. im using it as insperation for a true story im righting right now, please, i would be honored if you looked at it after its done, i will be sure to contact you again if you would be willing to read it.
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Ah-Dee22 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010
instant fave :)
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JackHarknessHarter Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010
:cries: Oh god every word is true!
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naomicchi-desu Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
nice job~
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therealprincessdaisy Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
I love this one :heart:
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doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
Thank yah. =)

I'm a daisy fan too!
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16HOTjmc Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2009
it's really... really beautiful. did you feel this way?
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Drist94 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
its a great poem and dont stop writting cause ur good at it^_^
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Peinbow Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2009
This piece has featured here: [link] . Please fave the news article so it can get more publicity, giving you more publicity as well. :)
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xXLostOneXx Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
it doesnt suck it the there is if anyone knows what love you do
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caitydee1 Featured By Owner May 10, 2009
That is amazing. DO NOT stop writing!!!!!
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mykardia Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
it so true! wonderful poem, it has a really nice rythem and flow =) good writing!
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JackHarknessHarter Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010
Star Trek and Bones?!?! I love you now!
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mykardia Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Haha =D Nice to meet you ^_^
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JackHarknessHarter Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010
^_^
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mykardia Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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JackHarknessHarter Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010
^_^
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mykardia Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Zelyn-Chan Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009
I love this so much!!! Its such a great poem!!! :3
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midsummercharm Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
this is a great poem! you have put love into words. but not only coverd the happy side, but the sad side too! good work my friend!
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secretlydyinginside Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008
I must say I was practically every stanza yesterday ha ha ha

I really like this poem. And I agree with ~phantomesse, this is a really good line:

Love can be evil. Love can be wrong
Love is not always simple
But it’s always strong.

Keep on writing, I need people like you :D
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missy-cutie Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008
:love:
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Metrostationluver26 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2008
Wow this is so good because it's true! i really like this one
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GamaGawd Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2008
dont down yourself its a very good poem! i wish i could write like that
o and ive been bored this week and figured why not so srry if takes up alot of room -_-

The Lovers of the Heart


In order to form a more perfect kiss, enable the mighty hug to promote
to whom we please but one kiss.


Article 1:

Statement of Love:
The Kiss


1.Kiss on the hand
I adore you

2. Kiss on the cheek
I just want to be friends

3. Kiss on the neck
I want you

4.Kiss on the lips
I love you

5.Kiss on the ears
I am just playing

6.Kiss anywhere else
lets not get carried away


7. Look in your eyes
kiss me

8.Playing with your hair

I can't live without you

9. Hand on your waist
I love you to much to let you go


Article 2:
The Three Steps


1. Girls:
If any guys gets fresh with you, slap him.

2. Guys
If any girl slaps you, her intentions are still good.

3.Guys & Girls
Close your eyes when kissing, it is rude to
stare.

Article 3:
The Commandments


1. Thou shall not squeeze too hard.

2.Thou shall not ask for a kiss, but take one.

3.Thou shall kiss at every opportunity.

* Remember *

A peach is a peach
A plum is a plum,
A kiss isn't a kiss
Without some tongue.
So open up your mouth
close your eyes, and give your tongue some exercise!!!

Here are a few reasons
why guys
like girls:

1. They will always smell good
even if its just shampoo

2. The way their heads always
find the right spot on our shoulder

3. How cute they look when they sleep

4. The ease in which they fit into our arms

5. The way they kiss you and all of a sudden everything is right in the world

6. How cute they are when they eat

7. The way they take hours to get dressed
but in the end it makes it all worth while

8.Because they are always warm even when its minus 30 outside

9. The way they look good no matter what they wear

10. The way they fish for compliments even though you both know that you think
she's the most beautiful thing on this earth

11. How cute they are when they argue

12. The way her hand always finds yours

13. The way they smile

14. The way you feel when you see their name
on the call ID after you just had a big fight

15. The way she says 'lets not fight anymore'
even though you know that an hour later....

16. The way they kiss when you do something nice for them

17.The way they kiss you when you say 'I love you'

18.
Actually ... just the way they kiss you...

19. The way they fall into your arms when they cry

20. Then the way they apologize for crying over something that silly

21. The way they hit you and expect it to hurt
22. Then the way they apologize
when it does hurt. (even though
we don't admit it)!

23. The way they say 'I miss you'

24. The way you miss them

25. The way their tears make you want to
change the world so that it doesn't hurt her anymore..... Yet regardless if you love them,
hate them, wish they would die or
know that you would die without them ... it matters not. Because once in your life,
whatever they were to the world
they become everything to you.
When you look them in the eyes,
traveling to the depths of their souls
and you say a million things without trace of
a sound, you know that your own life
is inevitable consumed within
the rhythmic beatings of her very heart.
We love them for a million reasons,
No paper would do it justice.
It is a thing not of the mind
but of the heart. A feeling. Only felt.

*

This chain started in 1887.
It is a love chain letter.....................................

In an hour you are supposed to send it to 25 people.
It is easy, just look into chat rooms and find them.
Anyway, send it to 25 people in 1 hour..
Now here comes the fun part.
You then say the name of the person you like or love and then the person will say 'I love you,' or 'Will you go out with me?'

NO JOKE!!!!!


NOW

THE CONSEQUENCES


The consequences are:

If you break the chain letter,
you will have bad luck in future
relationships. If you don't
break the chain, then you will be a
happy camper!!!

CoNgRatULaTioNs!!

You have been chosen
to participate
in the
LONGEST
and the
LUCKIEST
chain letter on the Internet!
Once you read, this letter you must
IMMEDIATELY
(meaning within
the hour)
be sent to
25
people After
you send it,
make a wish
and it will come
TRUE

YOU MAY NOT WAIT
FOR A CERTAIN TIME
TO SEND
IT........ REMEMBER,
IT MUST BE SENT
TO
25
PEOPLE WITHIN 1 HOUR, OR
YOUR WISH WILL NOT COME
TRUE!
If THIS CHAIN LETTER IS
CONTINUED UNTIL
THE YEAR 2010, IT WILL BE PLACED IN
THE GUINNESS BOOK
OF WORLD RECORDS!

PLEASE CONTINUE IT NOW!!!

*WARNING*


IF YOU DO NOT PASS THIS ON,
SOMETHING BAD OR WORSE
WILL HAPPEN TO YOU:

NOTE*

THE MORE PEOPLE YOU SEND THIS TO
THE MORE LUCK YOU WILL HAVE IN YOUR LOVE LIFE.

IF YOU BREAK THE CHAIN LETTER
(IT HAS BEEN GOING SINCE 1887)

YOU WILL HAVE BAD LUCK
WITH YOUR LOVE LIFE

FOR SEVEN YEARS. THIS IS NO JOKE.
GOOD LUCK
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MaxyDawg Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2008
I liked this poem a lot, and could hear it (in my mind, of course) being sung along with electric guitar and some percussion, as a song! Well done!
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haku1092 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
I find this poem to be so true that its scary 0o...its amazing.I wish i could write as good as you T.T
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karemelancholia Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2008
Today it's the dA Loving Day!

And for this event i've featured your deviation here : [link]

Spread the LOVE :heart:

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faxnessfan Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2008
this is a great poem
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waynechriss Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2008
Amazing, that is so true its baffling, especially for me. In spite of all that truth, love was only a facade for me, nothing more, nothing less.
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Moonlight007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2008   Photographer
I think its a really good one and everything about it is true
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Jessica-Ink Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2008
your writing doesn't suck,I hope this isn't your last in a while because I feel that I can't be the only one who thinks this poem is lovely,I mean look at all the comments,maybe then you'll realize,that your far from rubbish ^_^
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chicfairy Featured By Owner May 20, 2008
Omg...all of this ALL of it is like sooooooooo true to the bones!!!!
That is exactly the way i feel!!!!
Gr8 job!!!!
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miss-mermaide Featured By Owner May 20, 2008   Photographer
i really love your poem
why do you wanna stop writing???
your so talented :glomp:
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o0Wrock-Out0o Featured By Owner May 19, 2008
I dont know who u are.. proly cuz i live in iowa but i dont care i like this poem alot and dont stop writing cuz now i am interested so ya and i am addin it to my fav's.
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aleidahatesyou Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2008
lovely.
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