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They have it all wrong; I just know that they do
      Falling in love is not what it use to be.
You can't cage it, contain it, or set it free--
               You can't control it, want it, just let it be.
Why are they doing this? I don't understand;
        Searching for something, yet not taking a stand.
Do they even know what love is? Maybe I don't
                  But what I see, could it be?
Ah, how it makes me lose hope.
          Love is a power; it grows from within.
A desire that burns in the heart of a friend!
                  But what if it isn't? What if I lie?
What if love is nothing, just something that passes by?
                         What if the heart can fall for anyone?
Is that true love? Is that true beauty? Just falling for the sake of falling,
       Crawling for the sake of crawling, getting dirt on your knees
Just to please the aching hunger that burns inside?
                     Why won't it stop? Why won't it cease?
Why won't time stop so I can go back, and find love and true peace?
        Where am I going? Why am I afraid? Why do I freeze up
and let opportunity go the other way? Where is my net,
                   to catch a falling star? And fly away on dreams of young,
and dreams of old now fading with the noon-day sun.
        Where is love? Where did it go? Am I just hopeless?
Please, I want to know.
                         Unhappy in loneliness, but content to be alone,
Keep reaching for a beating heart
          For the sake to have something to own.
Do they have it all wrong? Or am I misinformed?
                      Because what I see is worrying me.
                                      Love is at war.
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I hate it.
I hate the fact where society is....
Where simple love is no longer simple...
it's all labels...
And wanting it...
Yet not really knowing what they want
Just settling for anything that comes close to expectation
for the sake of not wanting to be alone...
And not even really liking the person they are with...

Oi it annoys me so...
Anyway, I am ranting.
>.>
I don't care.
Perhaps I am hopeless..
Maybe I am not even a romantic...
Maybe I'm just pathetic with no sense of direction...
But if you saw the world in my eyes
Perhaps...
you'd understand too.


I'll get to deviations, comments, etc when i can.
Sorry guys.
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Love hurts...so use protection >.<
Love is something that is different to everyone, I think. It's all about what we want to see, and we tend to fool ourselves into believing things that aren't true. I know a lot of high school kids who believe that they're "in love" with their current boy/girlfriend. And, I'm talking people who've been dating two weeks. Love is one of the most overused words in the English language. People need to stop searching for hugs and kisses and movies on the weekend, and start looking for a deeper, more meaningful emotion.

[/rant] Heh :3 I liked it. :+fav:
you are completely right when it somes to the pint where most people are right now. i say most, because not everybody works that way.

i also looked at your comment, and there is one word that bugs me. its the thing that fucks love up for so many people.
---expectations---

i hope that made sense :D
either way, nice poem.
Or don't fall in love at all...hmmm...

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
beautiful concept.

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myspace:weed:
Exactly.
Love takes awhile to grow. It just doesn't happen over night. Those emotions are just a hormonal imbalance that gives a sense of euphoria and is also related to obsessive compulsive disorder.
Love is an obsession.
True...

But wanting to control someone else's life...
Wanting for the sake of just wanting...
But not really caring with who...
Not right.

Thanks...
I'm in a really ranting mood right now.

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
Well you have to think about what I mean by "expectations."
I know you really can't control your emotions in some cases...

But some people are so quick to want to give up on loneliness...
is that they declare love with anyone...

And that doesn't seem right to me.


Thank you.

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
what if you give up on loneliness on a whim. just like you say. and you take the first person that comes along as your lover.
just nothing slow, everything is completely spontaneous and based on not wanting to be alone.

what if by some weird coincidence you find the real deal that way?
i dont even know what im trying to say anymore :XD:.

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