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The moment was awkward and all was still
One moment we were laughing and then silence prevailed.
Our eyes met but I grew afraid—
Quickly I blushed and looked the other way.
But he just smiled at me and took my hand—
Sometimes I just hate it when he always understands.

And even more when he tucks my hair behind my ear.

He looks at me like that and logic just disappears…

I get weak in the knees, my hands start to shake
Has anyone ever compared love to an earthquake?
If not, I would have to say that’s how it makes me feel
I have to sit down or I cannot deal
And he just laughs at me as he sets me down
Safely, I sit upon the ground…

But he’s still looking at me strange…
Is my secret out? Does he feel the same way?
But what if he doesn’t, I thought too much?
And there’s no secret meaning behind his touch?

I hate it when I do that
It’s the reason why I never did well at math…

Maybe if I say something—what is this?
He just touched my lips with his fingertips!
Did he know I was going to say what’s on my mind?
Oh no! Maybe he wants to say he’ll never be mine…

Maybe if I use my puppy dog eyes?
No…that’d be bad. He might be force to lie.

He’s shaking his head. This could be bad.
He promised he would never make me sad!

Now he’s looking away…I’ll just pretend
That I’m looking at the grass and not him!
Brilliant! He’ll never suspect a thing
Well of course just as long as I don’t start to sing.

Love songs are all I know; it might look weird
To serenade the grass—it’s like picturing grandma in a beard.

Wait, she does have a beard…

Great, now I’m giggling and he’s looking at me again
Quick! Quick! Think! Pretend!
Ah yes, that is a lovely blade of grass
Really, I think it shows a lot of class…

I don’t think he’s buying my act
Thank you, Captain Obvious, for that fact…

So I sigh because I just can’t believe
How silly this whole thing has come to be.
Now these emotions are just growing way too strong
If I hang around, I won’t be able to move on…

Why does this sort of thing always happen to me?
Isn’t love supposed to set you free?

“I just can’t do this,” I hear him say
My eyes widen. Is he really going to walk away?
No! What have I done?
Have my feelings officially ruined all the fun?

“What?” That’s right. I’ll just play dumb.

But he’s grinning at me. He knows I can’t resist…
Now he’s leaning forward…

I think I just got my first kiss!

I blinked a few times, and he blinked too
And that’s when I got careless…
I blurted out “I love you.”

And I’ll never forget what he said next
“I know. I’ve always loved you too”

So we kissed again…

And that’s how I made a lover
Out of my best friend.
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Author's Comments

-giggles- Don't look at me like that! I really have no idea what I was thinking...


But dang, it was fun to write! lol


^^


And just so yunno....it's all pretend. I still remain kiss-less. Sheesh....lol



And my grandmother really doesn't have a beard.


She has a very nice face, in fact.


it's sweet and welcoming.


And she smells like cookies.



Just so yunno.


^^

Comments


:iconnarcs-redemption:
:rofl: lol i finished it and laughed! lol i lov it! u must of had a blast writing this!

--
A little bit of me and a whole lot of you,
add a dash of starlight and a dosen roses too.
then let is rise for a hundred years or two.
And that's the recipe for makin' love.
-- Harry Connick Jr.
:iconshadowwolf3117:
O_O cool! i have this strange feeling you succeded in confusing a lot of people . Ah well.

Well done! And you describe it well!

--
I rolled a natural 1 on my reality check.

My webcomic: Lords of the d20 [link]
:iconicefirex:
very interesting..

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Inhale, Exhale, Forget to Breathe.
myspace:weed:
:icondoorfromheaven:
teheheheeh....thank you! Glad it made you laugh! that was the main reason for it. Well actually :iconblack1guard: told me to write something silly, so that's what happened. lol ^^

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconblack1guard:
That was one amazing poem, it captures the emotions perfectly and I am sure those who have had their first kiss will connect well with this. If not well that is how most people feel I am sure. When it happens though it is like bottling magic! I am sure this poem will earn lots of faves! It has mine! =D

--
No hitting below the belt! >Takes off belt and ties to forehead<

Soy Nica y que? =P
:icondoorfromheaven:
Psh, I'll just thwap all the confused people. It's all good.


But thank you. ^^

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconnarcs-redemption:
lol well me love it! and im about to hold to votes and one is to determine wheather to put on more lov stuff or dark stuff! lol first one to 10 votes win!

--
A little bit of me and a whole lot of you,
add a dash of starlight and a dosen roses too.
then let is rise for a hundred years or two.
And that's the recipe for makin' love.
-- Harry Connick Jr.
:icondoorfromheaven:
Yup. It is. This is what happens when....I have ice coffee and my head hurts. lmao

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:icondoorfromheaven:
Awwwah, shucks! Thank you so much. ^^ And see you inspired me to write something silly, and it finally actually sort of worked. Though I don't think it compares to the "Would you ever eat a polka dotted banana" lmao


And awwah, that's a beautiful way to describe it...


"bottling magic"


I love it. ^^

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:icondoorfromheaven:
Awwwah, I am glad!!! lol And well I guess that works...though I think the world is already too dark as it is.

--
| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.

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