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I saw you sitting there on the counter—
     And suddenly it seemed like the world faded away.
At that moment, I swore to never love another
             I wouldn’t want it any other way.


You were perfect just the way you were—
       Brown and glistening in the sun—
And I heard them ask “Are you sure?”
              Yes, I knew that you were the one.


Because I love you, Ice coffee—
      You have always been the one for me.
Because I love you, Ice coffee—
          You’re the only one that can set me free.


Lots of sugar and then some cream—
          Not too much ice because I don’t like it watery.
Upgraded from a medium—went for the large
                Because this ice coffee needed to get me far.

It was love at first sight—I would never forget
        My first ice coffee that touched my lips.
Oh, from that day I’ve been mesmerized with no regret
            Always at reach of my wanting fingertips.


Because I love you, Ice coffee—
         You have always been the one for me.
Because I love you, Ice coffee—
            You’re the only one that can set me free.

I don’t think I can go on without you—
     Not a day passes by that I don’t at least think
Without you ice coffee, what would I do?
          Oh, I would surely sink…

Because you are my Ice coffee—
            You are my soul mate and friend.
Because you are my ice coffee—
          And you’ll be there ‘til the end.

But then that drastic day came—
    You were sitting on the desk, waiting—
And then in a moment, you were on the floor—
             I don’t think I’ve ever been so sad before…

Oh, Ice coffee…what have you done?
     Sitting on the floor now is no fun.
Oh ice coffee, how could this be?
         You were supposed to be for me.

I miss you ice coffee—
          I’ll get you back
I’ll find you somehow—
         And no, I’ll never drink you black


Because I love you, Ice coffee—
          You are the one for me.
I love the taste of sugar and the smell of cream
        There’s not a doubt in my mind…

I love you, Ice coffee.
Yup. So I thought I needed a little bit more humor to the gallery...so there ya go.


My first love.


My friend.


My companion until the end.


ICE COFFEE!! ^^
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:iconcoffeelovescandycorn:
COFFEElovesCANDYCORN Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i llove it its so bottyful(beautiful)
XD X3 lol.. iz soz highlarious!! ur just jealous...lolz jk
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mykardia Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
wonderful! I love it!
So funny! =D
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Infrunitas Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Have you tried the new frozen lattes? And I can see a lovely tune playing with these words.
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ytotheeccah Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2008
yesssssssssssssssssssssssssss
ice coffee rules!!!!!
you have no idea how much I loved this poem.
hahahahahahha
you ruuuuuuuuuuuleeeeeeeeeeeeee
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dragonfly89 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
=';) that was so beautiful!

lol..great work! I <3 ICE COFFEE
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007
Ahahahahaha thank you!!! Yaw ice coffee just rocks my world. It's my soul mate <333 lol
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:iconbubblegum17:
bubblegum17 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007
OMG!!! I remember that day! it was a sad, sad day in the life of Cassy ;) yup... this is hillarious!!!
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007
IT WAS!!!! and then Nate wouldn't give me another one...for free...
So you got me one because you were working
But he was going to give you free food anyway so yay free-ness. That was so much fun. lol
Miss those times...lol
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:iconbubblegum17:
bubblegum17 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007
mmhmm :) those were good times.. they were very good.. they might have been the most good times ever in the history of goodness
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007
Yeah....

Exactly...


And if you can overdose on the usage of the word "good"
We definitely do. lol
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:iconbubblegum17:
bubblegum17 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007
overdosing on the good is really good because it shows the good what hte good is and how the good is good and the most goodest thing ever in the history of goodness ever to be good :)
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:iconxdiscotique:
xdiscotique Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2007   Photographer
Amen.
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2007
^^ tehehe thanks. lol
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:icongreengreengreengreen:
oh my god!
i love iced coffee too!
my friends think i'm weird
):
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2007
yay!!!!! you can join my friend and our club. yup. We go psycho with ice coffee. It's great. ^^

And awwah, well they're weird. yeah, take that. lol
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:iconzombiekingjohn:
zombiekingjohn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2007   Writer
My drug is caffeine..........
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2007
So is mine. ^^ I can't live without my coffee, seriously....
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:iconzombiekingjohn:
zombiekingjohn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2007   Writer
I could possibly live without coffee.....but when I'd see it again, I'd drink it until my heart fails from the caffeine....so I guess I couldn't live without it? I don't know! Right now what I'm writing sounds like gibberish....lol
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2007
Yeah, see....because you'd be dead....because of it and because a lack of it that caused you to do that. lol So see, it's best to just...not go without and hold it close. lol


And it's okay...I'm a master of gibberish because I speak it all the time too. lol
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:iconzombiekingjohn:
zombiekingjohn Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2007   Writer
sweet...I speak gibberneseish!!!!!!!
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soslovinsungirl Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2007
rotflmao, that's great, i loved seeing this title in my deviations to look at, an ode to coffee, and iced coffee at that, i love cold coffee more than hot, but i love coffee in general and you professed your love for it most eloquently
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2007
tehehehehe....Oh yeah, I thought the serenading would be a bit of a difference with all the sadness that seems to be in most poems these days. lol


and yay! another coffee lover...and I agree. I love my ice coffee. ^^
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soslovinsungirl Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2007
indeed it was


lol yes gotta love coffee, love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it


and in case you haven't realized, i really do love it


lmao
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2007
....Wait what is it you love again? lmao


Just kidding. Yup, that's about how much I love it too. ^^
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:iconsoslovinsungirl:
soslovinsungirl Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2007
lmao, nice


that's great
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:iconjen1022:
jen1022 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
rotfl haha funny poem
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
tehehe thanks. lol
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:iconjen1022:
jen1022 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
lol ur welcome
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faerygirl24 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
wow... O_O hahahaha!!! that was really funny!!!!some of the stanzas were quite off, but other than that, it was really well done!!! :hug: haha

and yeah....i don't drink coffee... =P
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
tehehe...well it wasn't supposed to be like a perfect poem or anything, it's actually more of a song...and if you sing it the right way, it's all good.
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:iconfaerygirl24:
faerygirl24 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
haha, ok!
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:iconlovemeethate:
lovemeethate Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007  Student Writer
hahha. i miss getting to drink coffee.
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
awwwah....-pats- I would miss it too.
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:iconlovemeethate:
lovemeethate Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2007  Student Writer
hahaha.

ohman

BREAKING NEWS:
my fish.
died. =[
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2007
NUUUUUUUUUU!!!!


That's horrible. Not the fish....-cries- he was supposed to reveal all the secrets of fishiness to us before he died! now we'll never know...
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:iconlovemeethate:
lovemeethate Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2007  Student Writer
yes we'll never know.
but the good news is
i decided my gnome would become my new pet
the only way i can kill it is by smashing it with a hammer
^-^
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2007
YAY!!!! Bob the Gnome! He knows the answers, I bet!



And well....try not to get mad and smash it with a hammer. lol
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:iconlovemeethate:
lovemeethate Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2007  Student Writer
lmao. Well, I don't have any built up anger yet. So, no smashing anytime soon.
^-^
YET.
lmao xD
Just playing.
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2007
Good! Don't get any anger then because I love BOB!!!! -snugs Bob- lol
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:iconlullednightmare:
lullednightmare Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
lmao, nice! :D I actually know of a friend that acts that way towards ice coffee o.o just thought you'd like to know :XD:
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
tehehehe...really? w00t, sounds like my kind of friend. lol
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:iconlullednightmare:
lullednightmare Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
haha, yep :XD: I think I'll send it to him if he EVER signs on :XD: haha, do you like hyper, hyper, hyper, or hyper people that squeal?
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
Lmao sounds great. lol And ch-yaw! I have a tendency to do that...-shifty eyes-
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lullednightmare Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2007
lmao :XD: nice :XD: tis all good :D
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BrandNewWorld Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
Awesome lol I like Ice Coffee too...sicnce thats the only thing I can drink without getting sick lol that and expressos lol dunno why I cant drink regular coffee XD
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
YAY!!!!! go us and our love for ice coffee!!! And awwah, wow, that is weird...I can drink all types of coffee. It's amazing. ^^ ahhh, just thinking about it makes me happy. lol
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BrandNewWorld Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
lol haha but I think expressos are still the best especially ice ones :D lol make me so hyper and happy
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2007
Awwwwah, but we don't have expressos! -flails- gawd now when I go to Starbucks on Saturday...I won't know what to get. Way to go. lol
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:iconbrandnewworld:
BrandNewWorld Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2007
lol everything is good at Starbucks :D
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2007
Great. Way to narrow down the choices. lol
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