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The End of A Wandering Heart by ~doorfromheaven:icondoorfromheaven:



Spellbound yet twisted amongst the stars;
          Branches curved away,I sink to glance up
Upon a knoll, under the tree of dreams,
   Yet the wind whispers: never what it seems.

Lost to the night unspoken drifts,
     The further apart to another place.
Don't let go, I hear them say
         Yet I walk the distance another way.

Though the stars twinkle, they never speak
            Shaded away, yet still seeking their gaze,
Who knows what dangers lurk? I hide away,
     In the shadows, I currently remain.

Don't find me, but secretly I hope,
        A helping hand will be found.
And so I search even though I say no
                Yet deep down not wanting to be alone.

A full moon's rising in the horizon
      A dock not so far away, stands clear.
But when the ship pulls in, the captain's called
   I fear it is my name I'll hear.

Captivated, yet broken down amongst the stars
          Tangled branches, holding on to dreams--
A full moon is rising, it's coming; I hold my breath
                  When will my heart finally rest?
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Author's Comments

I really need to learn to take some initiative and not be so afraid...
Because I don't even know what I am afraid of...
The unfamiliar?
Perhaps, perhaps.

Only time will tell
And only time will mend
The scars of a wandering heart.

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:iconhopelesswithhope:
Awww. I can totally picture this poem...it's great. =D

[Patpat] Time...What a good and evil thing. o.o
:iconksmsoccer89:
its amazing. i love it. great job.

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Life can't get much better than this. Appreciate what you have while you have it.
:iconlullednightmare:
I really love the visualizations you put in there :] very beautiful

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Die Sterne im Himmel waren immer da...
:iconclo-1991:
aww thats awesome <3 nuff said

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:iconsomething44:
For a person who hasn't had a boyfriend since birth you're pretty romantic. Well, that's how I envisioned it. Nice delivery of the piece. Wonderful imagery. Good job! ^_^

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
:iconannafisha:
Oh wow..it's really beautiful..great job :D

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Poetry is a journey of emotions..For they are sailed in the ocean of words..
:iconkantoken:
When standing on the trainstation of Love
your luggage ready and waiting

And they pronounce the name
of the one you want to go with,

Do you hop aboard
or do you wait for the next train?

The ones waiting with you
will still be there

Waving goodbye, when you leave,
or to greet you when you return.

In love, there is no law.
:iconlovemeethate:
words cannot express how great this part was:
"Upon a knoll, under the tree of dreams,
   Yet the wind whispers: never what it seems.
"

It's so magical. (: I love this one!
(and of course, I'd favorite it if I could)


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The illusion is that you are simply reading this poem.
The reality is that this is more than a poem. -Bukowski

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