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Everyone else seems to have it when you don't
       Holding hands, laughing, smiling, but you won't.
Watching the world fall in love with each other
            But its an odd number and you're out.

Even the birds are singing harmony of love
          Young children are experimenting with their lips in the park.
Everyone is holding on to one another it seems
        But you're left in the darkness, holding on to dreams.

How many wishes must you make on each star?
        Time wasted--you're not getting very far.
All you want is that one kiss that wakes you
                  From this nightmare and out of this reality.
YAY! Shortness...
And it continues!
I'm losing my MUSE! AHHHH!
Nah, I just don't have time.
>.> I'm sorry.


Poem Number 5 for *noemia inspired by this picture: [link]


So cute.
Even pigeons fall in love.
>.>
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I-Yoshi Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I love this poem... so much... :D
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Ghost-Girly11 Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
awsomeness
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xShiori Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
wonderful
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euzhaphotography Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Student Photographer
nice :heart:
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lindiu Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2008
Really great, feel like in your poem.. Makes me wanna kiss someone. But I'm somewhat alone right now so..
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Infrunitas Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
The comment made me smile "even pigeons fall in love."
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lilywish Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2008
GAH lovelovelove :+fav:
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:iconlife-is-no-storybook:
nice job! i can relate. i've felt this way too many times for me to count.
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noemia Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
I hope you don't mind that I have featured this in my journal :).
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doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
Why would I mind? it is after all, your poem. Lol ^^ Thank you!! :heart:
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