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Everyone else seems to have it when you don't
       Holding hands, laughing, smiling, but you won't.
Watching the world fall in love with each other
            But its an odd number and you're out.

Even the birds are singing harmony of love
          Young children are experimenting with their lips in the park.
Everyone is holding on to one another it seems
        But you're left in the darkness, holding on to dreams.

How many wishes must you make on each star?
        Time wasted--you're not getting very far.
All you want is that one kiss that wakes you
                  From this nightmare and out of this reality.
YAY! Shortness...
And it continues!
I'm losing my MUSE! AHHHH!
Nah, I just don't have time.
>.> I'm sorry.


Poem Number 5 for *noemia inspired by this picture: [link]


So cute.
Even pigeons fall in love.
>.>
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:iconi-yoshi:
I-Yoshi Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I love this poem... so much... :D
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Ghost-Girly11 Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
awsomeness
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:iconxshiori:
xShiori Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
wonderful
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:iconeuzhaphotography:
euzhaphotography Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Student Photographer
nice :heart:
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:iconlindiu:
lindiu Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2008
Really great, feel like in your poem.. Makes me wanna kiss someone. But I'm somewhat alone right now so..
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:iconinfrunitas:
Infrunitas Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
The comment made me smile "even pigeons fall in love."
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:iconlilywish:
lilywish Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2008
GAH lovelovelove :+fav:
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:iconlife-is-no-storybook:
nice job! i can relate. i've felt this way too many times for me to count.
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:iconnoemia:
noemia Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
I hope you don't mind that I have featured this in my journal :).
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
Why would I mind? it is after all, your poem. Lol ^^ Thank you!! :heart:
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:iconnoemia:
noemia Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2008
You're welcome :)
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:iconashiemj:
ashiemj Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007
this reminds me of the black void that is my life- jus jking. but seriously, its totally my life, summed up in one awesome short poem. sweetness.
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:iconcitrush2o:
citrush2o Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2007
*sigh*... Feels just like me... :worry:_____:cuddle:
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:iconh2orowe:
h2orowe Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2007
Pretty good. I liked it, just not so much the rhyming. I'm not really a rhyme fan, though.
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:iconcabu12:
CaBu12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So sad yet true. Nice work!
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Mhm. It's how I feel right now. Gawd...
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:iconksmsoccer89:
ksmsoccer89 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2007
amazing. i love it as always :)
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Awwah, thanks. ^^;
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:iconksmsoccer89:
ksmsoccer89 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
youre welcome sweetie :)
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:iconbubblegum17:
bubblegum17 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2007
twinkle twinkle
little star
i wish i may
i wish i might
have this wish..
sometime tonight.

i wish for a nice guy.. that's all

is that too much to ask?
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Apparently. I think you need to wish on the moon for that. Lol
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:iconbubblegum17:
bubblegum17 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2007
what? are you taling about? i don't get it :shrug:
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:iconsomeonekrazy69:
someonekrazy69 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2007   Writer
sooo pretty i love it and your short poems? they rock
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
whoo hoo! maybe I need to write more short poemness. lol
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:iconthelightthatfades:
thelightthatfades Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007
ooo, me likey. I don't care that it's short, it's really amazing. so sweet.
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
YAY! thanks. =)
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:iconthelightthatfades:
thelightthatfades Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2007
you're spellcome of course.
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:iconlovemeethate:
lovemeethate Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007  Student Writer
i like it.
: P your little poems will take over thee world!
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
MUAHAHAHAH bow before my shortness of poetry. lol
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:iconlovemeethate:
lovemeethate Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007  Student Writer
:bow: lmfao
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:iconseptember-song:
september-song Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007
Lovely and oh, so true.
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Thank you. ^^
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:iconfaerygirl24:
faerygirl24 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007
i TOTALLY know that feeling.... >.> it can be really pain... :( but, you did a really nice job! and i don't think poems being shorter makes them less good! (that was a bit awkward...lol) it just makes them short. similarly, long poems aren't necessarily better than short poems...

i agree with David, you can't really loose your muse. i think you either stop listening to her, or something else over shadows her...
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Yeah it can be...
it's like...walking by the party everyone else was invited to...
and you're out in the rain...
looking through the window...
-sighs-
yup.
that's what it is like...

hmm..
okay my muse is just sorta sleeping then...
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:iconfaerygirl24:
faerygirl24 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
awwwww!!!

lol
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:iconshadowwolf3117:
ShadowWolf3117 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007
It's impossible to truly 'lose' a muse... he/she/it just takes annoying vacations... or gets kidnapped...

Thats what happened! My muse kidnapped yours and ran off to hawai'i with him/her/it! >.<


Anyway, that's a good, short poem! I like it a lot!
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Okay my muse is sleeping...somewhere...or maybe it is dead. I have no idea..
yeah that's it.
they're in hawaii..
without us..
dang them...
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ShadowWolf3117 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Ish certainly not dead. Sleeping, or maybe k-oed.

Definitely... how did they get there? and without our knowledge? O_o :shakefist:
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AngelFrmUrNightmare7 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007  Student
that is amazing!! and the funny thing is that i was thinking about that today and this poem just describes it perfectly :D :D
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
YAY!
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:iconannafisha:
annafisha Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007   Writer
I really really lurve it..:D like always
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
awwah thank you. =)
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:iconlonelymortal:
LonelyMortal Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007   Writer
so true!
:-)
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Awwah, thanks for agreeing. lol
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:iconlonelymortal:
LonelyMortal Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2007   Writer
lol Thx for your understanding :-)
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2007
Of course. I'm totally understanding. lol
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:iconlonelymortal:
LonelyMortal Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2007   Writer
:-)
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indieXchick13 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2007
urgh gawd i feel like this some time :( but it's expressed beautifuly and perfect Imma gonna fav it !!
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:icondoorfromheaven:
doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Yeah me too....
thanks for everything. ^^
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:iconindiexchick13:
indieXchick13 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2007
aww :glomp: and no ned to that that's what friends are for :D
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